Made me chhuckle, I could feel the tremble from here! Great job!
Reminded me of my childhood and made me smile. Love it.Melanie
So true - a clever catch!
A good one! With us, it is dump trucks.
I like this take on an event we can all relate to.
.. i marvel at artists - - if i make a cat it looks like a spider - he he - ur painting of the cardinal was attractive _ & ur haiku calls for peace ! ..
Big smile here; very creative catch on the prompt. Funny our garbage truck just did this not two minutes ago....
My trucker wasn't driving the trash truck..:DI like!now the waiting....
Victoria, this is neat. Most of us can identify with this. We can tell if we've missed the garbage by the commotion those trucks make...
I can't always relate to the bunnies and the meadowlarks. But a trash truck? This, I know. Great take on the prompt. Thank you.
Victoria there is a simple brilliance to this haiku.Gritty and noble and real too.
How well we know this tremble. Great take on trembling. I can feel the windows across the front of the house do this very thing.
Fantastic! Creative! Unusual! So...Victoria!
wow all these comments are so appreciated......thank you everyone.
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Haiku Prompt today from Haiku Bones is 'trembling'
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Made me chhuckle, I could feel the tremble from here! Great job!
Reminded me of my childhood and made me smile. Love it.
Melanie
So true - a clever catch!
A good one! With us, it is dump trucks.
I like this take on an event we can all relate to.
.. i marvel at artists - - if i make a cat it looks like a spider - he he - ur painting of the cardinal was attractive _ & ur haiku calls for peace ! ..
Big smile here; very creative catch on the prompt. Funny our garbage truck just did this not two minutes ago....
My trucker wasn't driving the trash truck..:D
I like!
now the waiting....
Victoria, this is neat. Most of us can identify with this. We can tell if we've missed the garbage by the commotion those trucks make.
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I can't always relate to the bunnies and the meadowlarks. But a trash truck? This, I know. Great take on the prompt. Thank you.
Victoria there is a simple brilliance to this haiku.
Gritty and noble and real too.
How well we know this tremble. Great take on trembling. I can feel the windows across the front of the house do this very thing.
Fantastic! Creative! Unusual! So...Victoria!
wow all these comments are so appreciated......thank you everyone.
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