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Sunday, January 10, 2010

Trembling Haiku

Haiku Prompt today from Haiku Bones is 'trembling'

here comes the trash truck
windows shake like dominos
all the way down street



14 comments:

Gia's Spot said...

Made me chhuckle, I could feel the tremble from here! Great job!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Reminded me of my childhood and made me smile. Love it.



Melanie

Tumblewords: said...

So true - a clever catch!

fourwindshaiga said...

A good one! With us, it is dump trucks.

Robin said...

I like this take on an event we can all relate to.

zoya gautam said...

.. i marvel at artists - - if i make a cat it looks like a spider - he he - ur painting of the cardinal was attractive _ & ur haiku calls for peace ! ..

Quiet Paths said...

Big smile here; very creative catch on the prompt. Funny our garbage truck just did this not two minutes ago....

gautami tripathy said...

My trucker wasn't driving the trash truck..:D

I like!

now the waiting....

Jim said...

Victoria, this is neat. Most of us can identify with this. We can tell if we've missed the garbage by the commotion those trucks make.
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madeline d. murray said...

I can't always relate to the bunnies and the meadowlarks. But a trash truck? This, I know. Great take on the prompt. Thank you.

Aulice Payne said...

Victoria there is a simple brilliance to this haiku.

Gritty and noble and real too.

Lisa at Greenbow said...

How well we know this tremble. Great take on trembling. I can feel the windows across the front of the house do this very thing.

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Fantastic! Creative! Unusual! So...Victoria!

Artist Victoria O'Neill said...

wow all these comments are so appreciated......thank you everyone.