Thursday, January 7, 2010

electrifying haiku

The prompt from Haiku Bones for this week's haiku is "electrifying".
schizophrenia
brain can't take it any more!
electrocution

8 comments:

Jeeves said...

Ouch!

Robin said...

Wow! Very intense...but effective expression.

Yousei Hime said...

Victoria,
Thank you so much for visiting my blog and leaving a comment. I'm glad you liked the cat haiku and drawings post. Stop by any time. You are most welcome.

zoya gautam said...

hi victoria,

ur cmnt recalling ur work with kids sounds like the fresh breeze

this haiku is gripping

thanks for writing it ..

Maribel Danta said...

WOW! What a visual! I thought your haiku was great!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Oh, looks like this poor soul is having shock treatments.
Just love your work.



Melanie

madeline d. murray said...

You took this haiku in a direction I'd forgotten was even on the compass. Nice work. Thank you. (Your blog is beautiful.)

Stan Ski said...

This is a great blog and this post is the work of a multi-talented personality.